All Comments on 'Second Blossom Ch. 04'

I think you uploaded the wrong story here. This does not make any sense to me.

Hi, I've been following your Second Blossom series, and I think you've accidentally uploaded a different story, because this has nothing to do with the first 3 parts

What is this?

This has no connection to the previous chapters.

You definitely posted the wrong story

Umm, thought I had a senior moment. Hope you didn’t paste part 4 somewhere else...

It seems you posted the wrong story. I was having some deja'vu though. I am pretty sure this series is like another one i read befors. Did you rip it off?

It seems that this story is Torgan Wine Ch16 from Sci-Fy and fantasy Not Second Blossom Ch4

TALK ABOUT RIP OFF ANOTHER AUTHOR WORD FOR WORD

GET YOUR OWN FUCKING MATERIAL YOU SACK OF SHIT !!!!

Plagiarism

While this was interesting, i hope you post up the real chapter 4 soon

SORRY BUT I JUST SKIPPED TO THE ENDING TO FIND OUT WTF WAS GOING ON. WHATEVER THIS WAS, PURE SHIT! I THOUGHT I WAS SETTING WITH MY EYES CLOSE LISTENING TO A BAD RERUN OF STAR TREK. ANYONE WANNA CLUE ME IN ON WHAT THIS AUTHOR IS ATTEMPTING TO ACCOMPLISH? I DID READ THE COMMENTS!!!

Yeah..."Second Blossom: Ch. 04; Text messages with mother turn into a sexy photo game." How in the entire Fuck is this even remotely close to the description?

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Okay. Chapters 1 - 3 were terrific. I couldn't wait for more. So, when I opened Chapter 4 what do I find? Only you know. As for me (and the rest of the reviewers, it seems) the expected continuation of Jake's & Chelsea's story has switched characters, settings, plot and EVERYTHING! Please delete this episode and submit the the REAL "Second Blossom - Chapter 4" installment. Thank you.

Teasing about anal licking and fucking will drive the son to madness.