by LilliannaMorgan
there's something about this story that keeps me checking your page for updates.
totally thick you should continue.
well done!
I love this story so far. The character development is good, and the overall tone (other than the rape scene) is so sweet. I love the whole set-up. The rape scene could have used some more details, however. The only other problem I have with your story is grammatical errors, of which you have MANY. But oh well, I'll sacrifice my dislike of technicalities for a good story. I truly hope you keep writing the other chapters! I look forward to reading them. :)
- LaLaLadidahGirl