All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 03'

by cuninglinguist61

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del_devildel_devilover 8 years ago

very well written better than the second part but still missing the chemistry which u show in first part the kind of lust romance and seduction you used in first part that totally missing here but still great work.. hats off to you.. .love if they get married. like to read more about these couple

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice story but wht didn't you finish it?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful love story

While regrettably never finished, Second Chances is truly a great love story. The characters really come alive to the reader, and the story never slackens for a moment. The plot is marvelous, and balanced off exactly right with tender love scenes in exactly the proper proportion. Five stars only because six stars cannot be given.

olddave51olddave51about 1 year ago

It is a great unfinished story. It is sad that you haven't finished this. After all it is called "SECOND CHANCES" it's like the second chance never finished.

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