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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
nice but

Not bad. I hate to quibble, given that this is a fantasy but no one, not even an eighteen-year-old can get hard again that fast. Keep it up MrMbert (pun intended) enjoyed the story and will watch for the next one.

yowseryowserabout 4 years ago

Seconded

A bit over the top with descriptions, but an amusing triangular romp.

'she said I had to save myself for tonight.'

Always a warning sign...

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
NICE HOT STORY

Fun reading.. erotic...ended too quik

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

But sex is soooooo automatic. No tension at all.

Needed to slow down. Needed dialog about what was going on and how it felt. Needed dialog where Lilah asks him if he masturbates? What does he think about when masturbating? Does he ever think about her? What does he imagine happening between them.

Three stars.

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