All Comments on 'Second Time'

Enjoyed it very much, thank you for sharing.

Cat5 has been on my list of favorites forever. Every new story posted only solidifies my feelings. This story is beautiful, sweet, and sexy. If you read and like this, you should try some other Cat5 stuff, like "One Little White Lie" or "I Raise; Will She Call". You won't be disappointed.

JUST GREAT. JUST FUCKING GREAT

thebullet

Thank you! For a great story! I don't think Shannon should be doing that very often! There will be trouble! Okay if it's just this one time! Why didn't Shannon stay and help out? Who was Beth sitting on the couch?

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

a wonderful gift a great story

Thanks for the insightful look at a well conceived and packaged slice of a lifelike scenario.

Your efforts, time and talent are very appreciated - More Please - with Regards

Thanx for a truly "Loving Wives" story. It was very erotic and fun.

I was a little thrown off when you put Beth in for Pam, must have been a typo, not enough to ruin the experience though.

Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...who is Beth?

Also, gentle, sweet, and very erotic.

Another good story that I like. Definitely erotic, loving.

Keep the stories coming

A very well written story that was also sensual. I have read some of your other work and found them to be of the same top caliber. Write well

Cat5 this is the first of your tales I have read. I am lucky to have found you and your tales. This was an excellent romantic tale. Thanks. I have to strech to call this a loving wives tale. i will make it a point to read you 'Loving Wives' Tales. USper

Loved the story.

This was an extremely erotic tale. I loved it.

Great plot and great writing. I really enjoyed it.

You better not try this in reality!

Lucky guy!

What is expecially like is the sex is not excessive or extreme something too many writers do. That makes what could be hot stories unpleasant and therefore not sexy.

If there were to be a followup to this story, I was wondering what would happen if Shannon would let Pam join in? Just to assure a more complete healing for her sister. What if Pam wanted to go to the same university? She could stay with them, if Shannon didn't get to jealous. lol

5*'s of course.

dwarcock is still alive after all...lol

Aside from some very minor spelling goofs, this is a well written story. Sex partners such as Shannon and the never-named narrator are relatively uncommon. I think their approach to helping Pam (also called Beth once after the sister-to-sister talk) was a great idea.

What might be interesting to see in a future story is how things play out over the next few years. Whats-his-name will be a tough act to follow and, based on the story's description of Pam's shyness, I have my doubts about her ability to be assertive enough with her would-be sex partners. Who knows? They may have to form a support group. lol.

It is refreshing that DWornCock can actually finish a story. AND score something other than '1'!

Story was instructive (pun intended!) Very sweet. However, unless Sis gets some practice in (and out and in and ...) fairly soon, she will need a refresher course. I agree that she is going to be spoiled when confronted with 'normal selfish' guys!

Good sex education tale but there was something not quite right about it. I don't know.

brings on Polygamy and multi-marriages, TK U MLJ LV NV

This story although sexual demonstrates love has nothing boundaries. Pam's big sister Shannon wanted to relieve her little sister's personal shame and complex so that she could return to a well rounded healthy young college freshman and get her feet back on the ground. Of course there are great philosophical debates to be had about using ones intended spouse for such a task but the real intent was overwhelming and trumped the lewd innuendoes that could be tossed.Great dichotomy, it worked for me and the story. I think woman are more prone to the throes of jealousy and it didn't phase Shannon. Great story. Thanks again.

Of course anyone who is grumpy can find defects, but it seems more appropriate to just enjoy.

Scores HAD to be maniipulated

Anytime she wants to fuck some guy, all she will say is; "but you had my sister!" I hope he knows he will be sharing his future wife with others, whether he wants to or not.

It's official, hell has frozen over! Cause I am actually going to mostly agree with betrayedby. Yeah? Surprised me also!

I think the problem I have with the premise of this story, is the failure to practice safe sex. Okay, probably "I" is described being educated in sex but the little sister's first time? That guy?

Blood tests and condoms all around. Until the "All Clear" sounds.

If this is suppose to be an 'educational' experience, I would grade it a failure. Cause it is obvious that Pam (as written by Cat5) is too psychologically immature to be taught sex the way you teach cats to swim.

As for k6 and analmousie...please put down the comic books and pick up a dictionary. Look up the definition for 'imaginary' and 'fiction'.

Take your boxes of crayons and some of your elementary school wide-lined paper. Now copy each definition one hundred times.

Heck & shucks, learning that much might finally get you out of fourth grade!

Some of the comments are too serious. This is a fun fantasy story.

I really liked it; 5*

Funny and completely ridiculous.

Enjoyed it, but jealousy and hurt feelings would occur.

This may turn out to be double posted and if so I apologize. But I liked the story so much that it deserves to doubly commented on...

So far I've only read a few of Cat5s stories, but I will soon add to the total. This was the most appealing to me, and it was so on several levels.

1. The only sex education classes I ever got were of the "this goes there, and abstaining is the only answer" type. As for a college course on the subject? Ha!

2. This developed a relationship between the two primary characters in an understandable and realistic way.

3 The love of Shannon for her sister came across quite well.

4. The dangers were addressed clearly and cleanly, both physical and emotional. Both of the principle characters communicated their concerns, and the concerns were addressed lovingly.

5. Pam was dealt with in a loving manner, and taught by a master that sex, whether fucking or loving, should be pleasurable for both partners. That's extremely rare in our society.

6. The descriptions of sensual/sexual play were superb. Even I, as old and "experienced" as I am, learned new things, things that may be pleasurable to any future partners.

All in all, I was delighted to read this and am left with only one question, one voiced by others: Who is Beth?

I'm becoming a CAT5 addict.

LOVE how much you blend in the female values and POV.

Hey, I'm a lifelong learner! :+))

Great gift for a troubled girl. I know there are many young ladies out there that had a bad first time. Too bad most guys are selfish as well as inexperienced. A course in advanced sex ed would benefit all and maybe reduce the divorce rate.

filed under fiction. Fun but no, this never happened.

I gave this story 5 stars, but wasn't going to comment, until I saw some of the stupid comments from some haters and trolls.

"She owns him" - Rubbish! He only "had" her sister at her request, and doing so was doing her a big favor, so it doesn't give her any leverage for her to engage in infidelities.

"jealousy and hurt feelings would occur" - okay, this commenter isn't a troll or hater, but I disagree. I know from past personal experience that it is possible to allow a partner to have sex with someone else without jealousy. One just needs the right attitude, in our case that we do not "own" the other person, in her case that she loved her sister and was secure enough in her Fiancé's love to ask him to have sex with her sister in order to cure her sister's trauma.

I also have a friendly disagreement with the person who said "based on the story's description of Pam's shyness, I have my doubts about her ability to be assertive enough with her would-be sex partners". Apart from the fact that it's just a story, Pam has a very powerful motivation to be assertive, plus there are different types of shyness and Pam's doesn't seem to match the doormat type.

As far as a follow-up is concerned, much of the strength in this sort of story is the build-up, and this would likely be lost in a follow-up.

And who's this Beth who was sitting on their couch, anyway, and why didn't she say anything?

An excellent story. Sexy and fun. No stupid melodrama. All the characters are likeable.

Not.happening , even in fantasyland.

"This isn't about love," Shannon replied, "It's about sex,.." Famous last words. And 2 years or 20 down then line, it becomes the justification for an affair. "Oh, Honey! It's not what you think! It was just sex! What we have is love! Don't feel threatened by a purely physical act!" If I didn't bail right then and there, I sure would have thought long and hard about it. Definitely would have dropped a note to the dean about his professors predilection for encouraging that sort of behavior.

First thing I thought of was the justification for her to cheat was just made.

Her comments would make most guys nervous cause sounds like she can see someone else but love a husband.

As others excuse to cheat later

Other problems sex education

Anal choice I personally prefer pussy only if out of commission and I don't mean period towels anal is just not near as good

Sex and love lust? I don't believe can keep completely separate from respect and trust etc

Ugh, I read that and can see future problems unless they have very open minds.

I recall some pretty wild partying and sex sessions while in college in the 60s/70s. While I was not one of the top participants, the action in this story was not outside those experiences. I will note that to the best of my knowledge, none of the college antics participants went on to long term relationships. Well written, sorry to see no recent submissions from Cat5.

Nice Read, but there is something missing with Shannon and Pam. In the story Shannon was there for the class exercise part (with Pam) but she wasn’t involved at all and then left (probably to masturbate alone). I think it would have fit the story to have Shannon masturbate while watching, complementing Pam’s body and how hot the other two look together. Being open and caring for her sister to the extent of sharing her husband to be isn’t really plausible without some other hidden motivation, so it has to be revealed at some point. Before Shannon leaves them, perhaps she reveals some things she’d like to try *with them* while she makes herself cum - maybe Pam cums too at that point. The rest of the story wouldn’t change much. There would have to be a brush off comment about comments make in aroused state can’t be counted on and the morning dialogue and future implications would have to change a little bit.

This is a nice plot concept. Readers have to remember that it's a fantasy. I'm positive that it's not a portrayal of an actual event. It would never really happen. So just take it that way and don't try to inject points about real-life concerns.

On the other hand, the technical writing skill is not what it should be, especially with respect to dialogue. It is stilted and the grammar and usage is clumsy and annoying.

Some may think this is unimportant, but that is a mistake. By taking care of such things and learning to do the correctly the author shows respect for the readers and for himself (or herself).

Unlikely, almost incestuous & potentially relationship ending.

However, nice fairytale.

5* from me.

But....the surest way to achieve being murdered in your sleep or otherwise is to get involved with a woman’s sister, friend, etc.

Doesn’t matter if you are broke up or not. Bad karma. Fair? There’s no such thing as “fair”. You are testing fate and it will cause a woman’s innate psychotic behavior to manifest.

I’m happy to suspend reality to enjoy this, though.

~Enkidu

Sweet story.

I think there is a small factual mistake in the following line

As I walked in Beth was sitting on the couch -- shouldn't this be Pam ?

I liked the story, but yeah, this was a fantasy. Pam will NEVER forget this happened, not if she's a human female, that is. And she'll remind HIM of it every now and then, especially when they're arguing. Regardless of the fact that she set this up to help her sister, I half expected her to stab him with a butcher knife when he finally emerged from the room. That wouldn't have surprised me.

People are people. You can share your spouse or partner - as long as you aren't truly in love with them. A comfortable relationship, one you're still in due to the laws of inertia, yeah, that could be a temporarily successful open marriage situation, but if you really love the other person, then there will be jealousy and fighting and uncertainty. There's a reason why 92% of open marriages fail.

Anyone who says they live in an open marriage without jealousy and bickering, they're lying so they'll appear superior to all other people, or they're trying to get into somebody's pants. I guess it could work if they don't care whether they lose their partner or not, but nothing else works. An "open" marriage is just another way to say that one, or both, of the spouses are shopping for something better.

great story even if it is fiction....for those that claim "it could never happen" or "Shannon will eventually cheat" they must remember that is how they view it so they could claim that by saying "not in my world" and let the writer decide what happens in his or her stories. "In my world" it is possible to happen and I could even see Shannon participating with her boyfriend and sister. Maybe the girls could even have some one on one time while boyfriend watches and see if they like that type of interaction. I wish the boyfriend had offered or Pam had asked to be "fucked" as well as made love to. Bravo for the couple to offer to help Pam see that not all sex is clumsy or unfulfilling for the female.

Idea for a plot but no plot to speak of. As for "therapy" that is utterly ridiculous. I was sort of expecting plot that the guy would simply switch sisters. If this would be reality it would only get worse - Pam gets attached to the guy, Shannon resents what happened, and the guy would be seeking to have sex with Pam again.

But the author has no ability to go further.

A ménage à trois is what people like that rebellious commenter Rome888 is suggesting will happen "in his world". I think it's another extreme outcome on the other end of the scale from this oft-discussed possible outcome of Shannon being prompted to cheat to get back at her annoying partner or husband.

Whether a ménage à trois or Shannon regretting her decision and avenging herself or a conventional couples' entwined lives (until Corona finally creeps in to collect their bodies)... happens to be the actual outcome of this unconventional story will depend on the strength of the MC's character and of the SO's sacrificing-for-sister quotient and more.

However the idiot jeopardized that by not sheathing his instrument of carnal poking-scribbling in at least a less permeable unripe banana peel if not a chocolate bar wrapper or standardized rubber safety.

A college class in Advanced Sex Education?

My initial impression is that this is a course offered by the school to want-to-be hookers for furtherance of their career aspirations, possibly even progressing as far as obtaining a degree in same. Ensuing "graphic" descriptions of the course's "hands-on laboratory" by its instructors actually encourages, rather than discourages, that notion.

Where does one display a BS in Prostitution, anyway?

Is it cheating if your fiance' loans you to her sister??!!

Having read eleventeen 'hall pass' stories (most of which pissed me off); I foresee this good deed coming back to bite him in the ass. You've heard it before, but now it's on YOU.

"I'd like to help out this painfully shy cute young guy at work. I would be doing a good deed."

"It's just sex."

"It doesn't mean anything."

"Besides, you had fun, didn't you?"

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After the long warmup; breaking her open like a double barrel shotgun and ramming a round in the chamber seemed a bit abrupt. Just saying.

Love and trust lead to the greatest of marriages and life together. Thank you for another great story.

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You got to love the comments. One in particular caught my attention. He gave this story a five but wasn't going to comment until he read some negative comments. LOL Are you for fucking real cuckie boy?

Definitely 5 stars

Who da f is Beth? You're a great writer, buy names don't mean shit. Once you chose a name stick with it, cuz changong it ALWAYS comes w errors. Many writers make this mistake. Don't change the name, we don't care. And anyway, a name that has a good ring to you may have a terrible ring for someone else. Just stick withbthe original name.

Great writing btw!!!

@dark2donut2

But the author has no ability to go further.

Apparently, you don't have the ability to even write a story and post it.

It was a wonderful story as far as it went. You have the makings of a first-class romance novel here. Why not finish the story? Well done, ad more chapters?

How the hell could he forget?

She had better prepare to share him occasionally. They’ll both need a repeat session or three.

Bill S.

In real life this would become an unmitigated disaster……..the big sister could NEVER accept this let alone be the one to instigate it. When the younger sister gets a regular partner ……he would never accept it. Human jealousy and possessiveness does not allow for these things AT ALL…..only happens in unstable commune like living that has a half life of months. R. H.

Now sure this goes down well in real life. The circumstances were pretty unique and they talked it out. But this could lead to Pandora's box bring opened. Don't see too many big sisters going along with this.

He took a college class that made him eat his own cum and get fucked in the ass

This is a great story. It’s a good illustration of how good sex can be when emotional maturity is involved. What made it work is the love they shared.

Nice tail. Lots of trust.

JPB

Its a better primer than what we were confusedly taught in health class, or crude locker room tales in gym or basic training.

Hard to find understanding girlfriends and wives or naive innocent girls who want to explore and learn.

Boot camp is a lot of 'no pain, no gain...'.

Is it the same with 'bootie camp's? (military base hookers?)

Yes, and no. I think this may work; but, there are very inherit risks that were not examined. I like the story overall.... thank you.

I can see this happening. Most of the girls and women I have been with experienced a bad first time. Teenage guys are usually bad lovers. They treat their partners as cumsluts. I highly recommend that guys find an older woman to train them. That's why I consider myself a lover, not a fucker. I admire the couple in this story for their love for each other and the trust necessary to help Pam. A few tips on finding the right guy might have also been helpful. I've always found that the first kiss gave me a good idea of what kind of lover my date would be.

Got to remember that this is fiction. Do I think it could happen in real life? Maybe, but it could also spell the end of two relationships, one between the sisters and one between the MC and Shannon. In a perfect world it would work, but in a perfect world Pam wouldn't have had such a jerk for her first time. It's a nice story that tries to explain the difference between love and lust. Four stars for a caring couple that are willing to help a sister.