All Comments on 'Second Wife Ch. 07'

...that you like women very much! But your stories are well-written, hot, and entertaining. I'll keep enjoying them.

Thanks, ohio

glad to see your back.

thanks for another installment of Bill "Bean Counter". i almost missed this continued lesson in revenge as i scanned the new releases, and i would have been sick if i did. thanks again and keep 'em coming!

on all counts. This guys an asshole, but a funny one.

the character and the author. I'm happily married and have a great relationship with my wife, my mother, my mother-in-law, my daughter, and plenty of female friends. Just because an author writes about something from a character's perspective doesn't mean that he necessarily agrees or condones that perspective. One of my other stories is about a time-traveling serial rapist. Do you honestly think I'd condone that? Just sayin'.

I love your writing (Thats the brilliant part) and Bills my new hero (Thats the sad part)

I enjoy your writings, sure hope you don't remove Mary from the story any time soon; keeps it interesting. You have talent. I might even have to share your stories with my husband! ;-)

Jerry in Washington State, USA - Somehow I missed this chapter when it first appeared yesterday. I check your list of stories often, so I was able to catch it today. I liked this chapter for several reasons. I got a kick out of Mary giving Bill date advice about Dana ... it was weird / odd but quirky fun. I enjoyed the fact that Bill wasn't able to get sex out of Dana on the first date - Bill had been getting laid very easily and it was more realistic to me that he would occasionally end up on a date without sex. I loved Dana's reaction to Bill's rejection - the office sex scene was hot and fascinating!! I also enjoyed that there wasn't the emphasis on humiliating Mary in this chapter. I'm much more interested in the dates / sex that Bill has in his hunt for the Second Wife more than I am about further humiliation of Mary. I much look forward to your next chapter, but admit I wasn't sure if I would ever see this chapter appear.

THANK YOU FOR THIS ENTRY IT HAS BEEN LONG AWAITED..........MORE PLEASE

Very entertaining. I like how you're developing Mary charcter throught the diary.

I enjoy your writing... have bought what you offer on Lulu. Please send more!

Great story man. I love your writing. You should do nothing but write all day. How long does it take you to write a new chapter? They're all so hot.

Great to see you continuing this series, can't wait to read more

This series is one of few that i check for the next part every time i log-in. Great story!

I've read both series several times now and I just have to say it's great. A+ job.

Hope you'll come back to this series. It's excellent!

Ready for #8?

The title of the comment says it all. I'll keep turning the pages if you keep writing them Would also love to see a new chapter to cock of age series.

Well done and have really enjoyed your craftsmanship.

No. I really do not like Dana. And it has nothing - okay, maybe a little - to do with the fact that I absolutely hate the name Dana, but she's just so… I just don't like her. Not a bit. Every single other girl has been more interesting. Except possibly those met at the Christmas party in BC.

Both series are great fun; wittier and wiser than most. The "punishment" is more psychological and emotional than really sexual.

I hope Creamer finishes this series not because I want it to end but because I'm really curious to see where he chooses to go.

Read this one over 8 times. Every time I come to see if you have put any updates, I read this one as it always get me going. Please finish the story. Hope the 9th part comes really soon.

when young, more than once almost got my ass kicked by turning down a cuniving, bitch, her and her female and male friends...it didn't make sence then, but after your story I can see it now...TY...very good write...bill

Everyone man looks for a potential wife by whether she fucks on the first date?! Welcome to the Twilight Zone...