All Comments on 'Second Youth Ch. 01'

A bit self-indulgent. There are better ways to introduce a person than in first person. Is it critical to know a woman is 169 cm or 180cm? No not really. We'll learn her name when Tom calls her Miss Eve. In places, this is over-written. "On the Couch...that piece of furniture." That's rampant silliness.

Lucky Tom bastard. If he has such a big "tool", I doubt he's a virgin, with good size comes confidence, so I bet he already had some girls at least play with his schlong. This is going in the right direction, so let's move on to Ch. 2. 5*.