by chocolatecookie3
Great story cookie, let us know which line you ride on to follow you better
I love the mysterious ending, would like an encore, without a stalker-y vibe ☺️☺️
I saw that this was only one ppage so i was afraind it would be a wham bam thank you man but instead you opened up beautifully at the end, allowing all kind of intrigue and mystery. I LOVED IT
Good story mate, keep writing this series with the next installment. I loved it being simple in writing, I write in a similar fashion for ease, but also to describe things. Maybe in the next installment, her secret admirer takes her whilst she's on a busy train, or when she's sitting on a busy bus. He can do a bit more to her perhaps.
Great work! :D
please continue...
this story is so intriguing.. i love how it keeps you waiting but not to like a maddening point like with some stories..
Sometimes a short story that sticks to the point is exactly what I need. Thanks!
the excitement of anonymous, but hardcore sex. Very well written and begs for a follow.
Lee
The simple sentences, monosyllabic vocabulary and theme bludgeon of 'literotica story into actual event' didn't do it for me.