All Comments on 'Secret in the Secret Ch. 20'

good dont wait so long for next chapter

The only thing I didn't like is the chapter ended mid-conversation, just seemed a little bit not-right. Still, left me waiting for the next one ;-)

Aw man, you've got Emily passionate for Amanda, and now she knows about her little secret. I'd assume Emily's still a bit apprehensive (and not every single girl would suddenly go fuck-crazy if they met a real life futa) but this chapter leaves us with such a tease.

Don't take that as a negtive; I still enjoy this and your Mermaid series greatly and hope they both continue, but I just didn't expect this latest chapter to just sort of end mid-scene.