All Comments on 'Secret Shawna'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ok

nice story, but starting puberty in third grade is sort stretching it

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
keep going

Great beginning. Good charachter development . You wrte sex scenes very well. I am a big fan of all of your work and I enjoy reading all of your submissions.

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