All Comments on 'Secret Sin'

by IntenseQuiet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
WAY TOO SHORT

hardly worth reading, way toooo short, just got into story and it ended...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Just Right

I disagree with the comment that this was too short. I think this story captured the mood of urgency and how her toy had driven her crazy through the day. When she finally had a chance to be by herself it was short and sweet.

IntenseQuietIntenseQuietalmost 17 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading me

I love writing for you.

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What can I say? I love writing, and thinking of odd ways for people to interact without the usual constraints of societal convention. Just a bit of harmless (mostly!) fun. Also, many of my stories are not overly long and drawn out. They are more of a brief, passionate kiss...

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