All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 05'

Sooo well written! The pace of the story is excellent as you lay out the little hints of mind control and the lieutenant slowly realizes the signs then is pulled back under control.

I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next installment. I’m curious about Tara’s parents and if they share her “affliction”.

Wow! Is about all one can say. It's pretty clear now there is obviously a Burchell connection. The question now is what and who. Is some one here a relative, or do they just share the power of Sera's descendents? And who is it? I was leaning towards Donna, and those eyes seem to be a clue, but things aren't always what they seem. Really love this story, and can't wait for the next chapter.

TimTam

Such a hot, fun read! Worst part of the story is waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for writing!

This is the best four part series I have read. Sera amazes me more and more. I wish I had one or knew one. This author has me hook, line and sinker.