All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 06'

No turning back for our heroine now!

Very hot scene. Though I do find the major a douche and hope he gets his in the end, the others were just doing their civic duty. Still, I have to wonder what Donna will think. She is obviously a Burchell, or else has the same type gift they do. If she's ok with this turn of events, fine. But if she's not, there could be hell to pay, starting with Major Douchebag. I can see her taking his wife, children if any, siblings, parents, etc, right in front of him, then after that humiliation, taking his mind. We shall see. Great story! 5 stars.

Here it is, years later, and rereading this I am still amazed at how well it is written. How you create sympathy for Tara and make us feel what she feels.

You know how much I like your work. I like this one even better the second time around.

Tara's self discovery is a journey worth reading. Although fiction, I find the activities of this religious "Army" reflective if most religions once the veil is lifted and the inner circle exposed.