All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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I wish the car scene was longer. More stuff like that

gumby42gumby42about 6 years ago
Seraphina

Early in this episode, donna is called seraphina by the author. Was this intentional or a typo, foreshadow!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a8 months ago

Seraphine/Donna - the same being. If I remember correctly see "Sera - family history). Having "activated" Tera, I can see the wisdom in letting Tara learn of her power by trial and error with Donna in the background to fix things. Reality/life is a firm/hard teacher but a tracher none the less. The author continues to develop his characters in depth and breadth while continuing to seamlessly merge plots. 5 stars for character development, plot and subplot development, and use of sound research.

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