All Comments on 'Secret Summer with Melinda'

Super! Love it

A great hot sexy story love it so much

Oh NO! You must GO ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Loved it.

However it ended prematurely, as IMO is thould have told what happened when they had to leave grandma's house, although the obvious assumption is that they would move into another place together.

An editor is definitely required. Not just for spelling, but for fixing things like switching between "her" and "you" mid sentence.

The best sex scene I ever read. Reminding all of us that sex is way more than just bodies colliding, way way more...

Stellar.

I must disagree with my anonymous brother below about the club scene, I could almost see it happen, by your writing. You just sweep the reader along with how intimately and erotically you set this whole story. That said, there are small problems with the club scene, and in general.

Small probs: Going barefoot to the club took almost took me out of it. The areas around and in bars are so nasty for walking, few people that respect their feet would willingly go barefoot to a club. Going to a dance club without shoes is also not great for dancing. The brother is an unknown quantity in age, and no reason is given for his intimate knowledge of the club scene in this town. He seems younger by his job and in looking for another job, by his seeming to look up at his sister, and by his "sneaking" to watch his sister. Yet, if this is so, his knowledge of the club needs to be explained even moreso. Also, what happens after the summer? Is the epilogue after they return home, or not? Have they gotten their own apartment because she does not want to be in her parents' house and pay rent to her parents anymore, and he has, in fact, moved on, as he is supposed to do?

Were they in it, after all, only for the deeply erotic, well-written sex, or is there more to their relationship and their story?

That said, an excellent story.

wow!

I love your writing. Wonderful erotic stories that build on the established theme or plot. I like the twists and turns of your well developed stories. This was another great example of your expert storytelling.

You nailed it until the bondage club, went down hill from there

Great writing. You make the characters feel real. I wonder what the future will look like for them.

I love your writing -- the building of the relationship, the incredibly passionate sex, the humour.

You are the best writer on this site!!

you are, hands down, the very best erotic writer I know. you write lyrically and with awesome sensuality! I'd write more but I'm a mess from your story. I'll try to add more later.

I've read several of your stories, and left my praise with them. This one is top knotch, too.

Are any of them written from the first person perspective of a/the female character, specifically a sister?

Wow, your beginning is so great but your build up is just way too long... by the time the actualy acrion starts all my interest and hornyness went away... LONG AGO ALREADY...

Shame

... this one was seriously hot! Your attention to detail, and description of their, finally, making love was intense.

I didn't particularly care for some of the things that took place at the Club either, but just some of them. It all did add, considerably, to Melinda's arousal though.

And even though she did initially say "no", the sex that followed was both extremely intense and satisfying for them both.

I agree wholeheartedly, in real life, "No" absolutely means "NO!", but it's just a story, people, involving though it may be.

I liked this one, alot!

under today's laws when a woman says no, the man is to cease what ever he is doing

I think the club scene is abusive and totally un-needed

That was hot! I got completely lost in your words, you have a gift.

I too was turned off by the club visit. I would like to read some more of this though. Like what do they do when Granny comes home. I never read where they fell in love either.

What happens from here depends on how you want to finish it. I just love happy endings though.

The whole sex club scene in this story was a complete turn off. I don't understand why the author thought having the brother treat his sister, someone he was supposed to love and care for, the way he did at the club was a complete and utter turn off. That little foray completely ruined the story. This author also has a habit of not finishing stories. Quiet a few of those throughout his writings.

Warren.

This story got my cock so fucking hard!

. . .albeit incest, but both sibling found what they desire, Another five.

I have a love/hate relationship with this story...

Love the first part with its transition from voyeurism to masturbation and love, love, love the last part with its beautiful descriptions of sex between this brother and sister. Unfortunately, hate the middle part with its trip to the sex club -- not bc of the writing as it is great, not bc of a prejudice against sex clubs, rather it just didn't fit into *this* story. The entire trip to the sex club could be stricken and this story would flow better.

I was engrossed with this story , I dont remember them every telling each other how much they loved each other thou,

Perhaps after the 3 month period is over, they found a house and moved in together in order to "save money" yes?

Marvelous!

The characters are engaging enough to deserve a sequel.

On the scale of 1 to 5 stars, this is a six!

Thank you.

It was good until about halfway through when you had the male character perfectly fine with another male feeling his sister up. I stopped reading at that point.

The buildup is perfect I could not stop reading.

Please continue more love like this.

Cbf

You have a real talent for building the erotic. I bet you do the same with the women!

More please

The build up was so exciting, when he finally had his cock inside her... wow!!

sooo hot!

The spelling gaff is minor when compared to the over-=all energy and downright power of the story.

So there we sat. "Mmmm. Your right. This IS nice." I said,..

It should have been "you're right..."

Other than that...you cast a great spell!

I was totally waiting for the guy to try to lick her pussy by saying "it ain't going to lick itself" lol. too bad that didn't happen. Nice story, although I wish it had more love in it that was expressed verbally between the two.

I've never posted a comment before for any story I've read here, and I've read some incredible stories. This was easily wins over all of those. The way you bring the sisters emotions out, the psychological aspect was perfect, just made the story that much hotter. You've really got these characters down, and I applaud you for that. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for anything you post in the future.

Wow! This would have to be one of the best written incest stories i've read on Literotica. And i've been reading there stories for a few years now. Wow. Added to my favourites list. I'll have to check for more of your stories.

Screw these other petty "editing" comments. The sex was so well written that it eclipsed any negatives. I've read a bunch of story's on Literotica and a lot of the sex is repetitive and even boring to the point of skipping over it. This one is the very best that I've read. Of course I will continue to read and search for another as good but I think I will return and reread this one from time to time. Great job.

I've been lurking and reading erotic stories for at over 10 years. So, I have read many stories - some good, some not so good but I have never felt as compelled to leave feedback on anything I read as I felt after reading your story. In fact, this is the very first time I do so. So for what its worth I just had to tell you that I loved what you wrote. The story was engaging, erotic, and very well told. The characters were believable and easy to relate to. You managed to tell an old story with a freshness that makes it feel like this is the first time we are hearing it.

I agree with the rest that there are some grammar errors and some misspellings but I think that we all comment on that because the writing is so good, that we are surprised to see those errors with writing of this caliber.

Thank you very much for sharing!!

Yes, it does need a bit of editing, but . . . it is still the best story I have ever read on this site. The slow build of erotic tension is teasingly good, the characters are believable, the development of the story is plausible, and . . . it isimply the best incest story on this site!

I've got one thing to say WOW. I haven't seen writing this good in a long time. thanks I enjoyed reading it. Yes some fixing of words and verbs wouldn't hurt. W.S.

That was Wonderful!!!! I'll add that you do need a little more proof reading but as previously stated it hardly detracts. I absolutely loved this story and would like to see it continue, their love must go on!

That was an amazing story but i agree with the other dude, it sort of ruined it.

Wonderful erotic story, great build-up. Spelling and verb tense need work, but hardly detract from it.

This was one of the best! EXCEPT when you changed the point of perspective at the end from 'she' to 'you'. Don't you know men like to read these stories, too? And that's sick.

Great story, with wonderful character development. Absolutely top drawer. Thanks.

I absolutely loved this story! The subject in the foreground is sex, and the various scenes are incredibly erotic. But what I think makes this story so powerful is what is happening in the background, a developing and transforming love between a brother and sister. The single feature I like the least is the scene in the sex club. Although erotic also, I find it "dirty" (in an undesirable way). It does advance the plot by deepening the relationship between the brother and sister, but I think it tarnishes an otherwise completely "clean" development of love through sexual explorations. The same plot advance could have arisen in many other ways. But even with this one "impurity" in the plot, I think this story is fabulous, and I thank you for sharing it with me!

just reading this is making me horny and wet

I love the buildup on this story. That's the kind of stories I like to read, something with at least a little believability. Thanks for this one.

It just doesn't get any more erotic than this. Thank you for the wonderful story!

All I want is to lick your mind! I write incest stories too and your taste couldn't be closer to mine...

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm FUCK!

haha

I'm not going to try to tell you what you did right -- you know how to push all the buttons. I don't think you should write any more about them; they've gone on, together or apart, and any more would just be squeezing more out of a dry fruit. Yet I feel that if you wrote it it would be a "new" story, not anything we thought it would be. So just keep writing and giving us stories that tell the "old story" in a new and different way.

Great work I am big fan of this genre and this was by far one the beer stories I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time...

Keep up the excellent work

the most detailed storie i have read i loved it

...longest description of a fucking I have ever read. So damned detailed! I felt a part of it, I was him, those were my experiences. Thanks!

Great! The best I've read.

I've read many stories on Lit but this undoubtedly is the cream of the crop. The way you make the characters 'come alive' is awsome!...Absolutely sensational!!...Keep up the good work and try to get this story published...You'll make a million with a good editor and publisher.

This one of the best stories I have read in this genre. Your description of their first coupling was absolutely outstanding! You should do the sequel.

Thats gotta be one of the most amazing stories ive ever read on here. I felt a connection with the characters that made their culmination so much more meaningful. THANK YOU>

Very, very good.

you are the most talented writer on the site. the way you built up the relationship was amazing.we felt the characters closeness to one another at the end and you made us feel we were right there with them.please write more incest.

I've read a few of your stories and it's true - you have a way with words that puts other literotica writers to shame. Your stories are not overly wordy yet they are long enough to be good. They move reasonably fast but with plenty of build up. Your words are hot but never stupidly vulgar.

dam. this was the greatest stories out there. deserves to be number 1. incredibly amazing. i love it.

Great great story and characters. The progression of events, pushing the limits of their relationship, was a real turn-on.

The grammar and composition could use some work though, but grammar means nothing without a good story line.

Good work!

simply awesome ;)

very real, hard not to cum during the read.very descriptive,thank you very much,made me long for my favorite sister.

AMAZINGLY hot story. I loved it. I tend to be a little anal when reading stories with grammatical errors, maybe it's something I am a little O.C.D on. But your storyline and characters unfold soo well, that after I got passed the first page I just couldn't top. Well done.

A truly amazing story. May be the best I've read. Very nice work - I hope you have more!

I've never commented on a literotica story before.. Have never felt the need to do so.. GAWD!!! i got off to one of the most intense orgasms i ve had in months reading this amazing shit you've written.. Hope u can publish your stories in mags to benefit many more retards like me

that was amazing ive read almost all the stories on here and this is my fav one!

i usually dont like long stories with more then 3 pages but the details and the way the story was formed.WOW.it was really great story.it was a never dull moment.

this story is far and away the best i have read on Literotica. The detail was riveting, the plot kept me reading, and the elivery was flawless. The tense change at the end took a sec to attune to, but was not at all an issue. THANK YOU for this story, and I hope when I click the author's link that there'll be more like this from you.

I'm not often impressed by much I read on Literotica, but youbadboy has written a true wow-er. Just loved it. Great read, wonderful action. And, glory be, proper spelling and grammar!!! Looking forward to reading the rest of youbadboy's submissions.

MAn, congrats, simply the best story on literotica.

Speechless

That was incredible, it was the first time I've read a story and got off to it.

This story is excellent. Great job!

I had once again forgotten my faith in the deep goodness of sex, until I read your story tonight. Because of this I think that faith will live a little longer now, and perhaps be a little likelier to find a more permanent anchor. I thank you for this service.

Probably the best incest story I've read on Literotica!!!!

incredible. i'm truly impressed. your writing is superb, different from any other. (few grammatical and tense change mistakes) well done. (i'm gonna fuck my beezy just like that)

Buxw qiej! i mean, Nice work!

That was possibly the story I have read here. You kept the story flowing. Very intense sex between the brother and sister. Keep us excited.

Pretty good story, the change in tense at the end really bothered me... To the point of being distracting. Otherwise a good story.

I've read a lot of stories... but this one is by far the best. The build up between the characters was intense. very well written.

omg you are the best writer i have seen on here so far. keep on writing, you have a talent.

Exquisitely erotic. Story started slow and I was beginning to wonder if I had accidently run across a Gay or Lesbian story (which I hate to read because I consider that behavior learned deviancy). Then it went into mentioning your balls or cock and I could tell the difference. I'm wondering.....are we going to get a continuation? I ask this because there was no mention of birth control and this brother-sister thing would be an ample opportunity to begin baby-making?

So very,very intense. Can only add my thanks for writing such a great story.

best ive read in a while

please keep writing

That story was incredible. Wonderful job.

That was GOOD! Superb writing. Very sexy indeed.

Oh, what I would give to have a sister like that...

:sigh:

I love the way you explore the characters limits. I thought you did wel from start to finish. Keep up the great work - few writers here compare to you. Thank you.

So...Melinda means Eros...no? Simply the finest, true erotica I have read on this site...Your descriptive skills made me very nearly able to taste "her". Innocence and slutiness are such a HOT mix. Good job...

one of the best i have read on lit, kept me hard through the whole story, EXCELLENT

As usual, you have given us the standard of writing we have come to expect from YBB. While very similar to parts of your "Sara & Jason" stories, this tale was not as good having lesser writing/character development. However, your readers loved it and that is what counts! The 'Club' scene was out of keeping with the rest of the story and spoiled it for me. In the "Sara & Jason" stories, the Club scene was 'naughty' and Sara was a very 'loveable' slut having a great time with her equally loving brother. Here, Melinda is an 'unfortunate' weak woman submitting to the lust of her not very loving brother (just my opinion?).

Generally speaking, I love your stories so keep them cumming!

Absolutely,fantastic,made me feel as if I was there.

Incredible.

I'm so picky about what I read, but your story had all I was looking for. Keep writing hot stuff like this. I am sopping wet and have to find a private place to finish. Mmmmmmm. So very sexy. Thank you so much.

fucking awesome is all i can say

Wow that was good-

real good story, perfectly drawn out and definitely hot.

For most of the story, Melinda is refered to as "she"... towards the very, very end... the "she" is changed to a "you". I was wondering at this change. Was it intentional? OR accidental? BUT! That said. This is a very, very good story. Well developed and with awesome imagry.

This was definitely the best erotic story I have read in a long long time - and it had me hooked from page 1 without a falter, with the exception you already have been alerted to of the subject switch from her to you, him to I...distracting indeed but does not detract from enjoyment.

Your characters are well developed and lovable (can't think of a better word) if not fuckable! LOL The club scene, well as a bit of a Dom myself I loved what homeboy did with his "little girl"....Oh it was divine really and not degrading at all.

Also their pet names are so titillating in this story even though of course I have heard "little girl", "My little girl", "bad boy" etc plenty of times in RL and in stories, but somehow you made them sensuous and seductive in a way I haven't seen before.

I would say keep up the good writing/character development, and showing the sexual act as more complex a thing of beauty than is often explored.

As others stated, I was concerned during the club scene that you were going to allow Melinda to be degraded. So, when all that was said was "pillow-talk" I was very pleased that you did not deviate from the basic characters.

I also have to mention the imagery that you use. Brilliant!

One observation: During the latter part of the story, you seemed to switch the tense of your pronoun usage for Melinga. That shift in persepctive was a bit disconcerting to me. Also, the story left me hanging, hoping that there might be a continuation. The reason I say that is that, as idyllic as it might for them to continue to live together at Nana's house, it ain't a gonna happen. What happens when Mom and Dad come to visit or Nana comes home? Inquiring minds want to know! :)