All Comments on 'Secretary Blackmailed Ch. 01'

Yes definitely more please.

... but one would have thought that a lesbian boss would be somewhat more sophisticated ... Maybe future chapters will show more finesse.

The story is good, but the () is confusing and also saying who says what isn't helping the story. When writing a story you can do without those things.

I hope these tips will help you

WHY would you use the ABBREVIATION:

"pls" INSTEAD of the ENTIRE WORD: "please"?

Are we reading a TEXT message or a REAL story?!

Unless you're planning on hiring a troupe, this isn't a play.

I loved the idea and can't wait for further instalments. most of the comments above are nit picking.

This is a great start for the story. In the coming chapters could you do away with the () because that was bothersome to read. Will you be introduced bondage into the story also?

This is my first work everyone.

Thank you for explaining how the story worked for you and how it didn't.

I really appreciate that you found the time to write the comments.

I will definitely refrain myself from using "()" & the dialogues & the text language.

I am always open to suggestions about the story as well.

I would also love to hear you experience reading the story. Was it exciting enough or needs more spice..

All Love.

Happy reading.

I would enjoy more stories along this same theme. Thank you.

Or something to do with Suzy's heterosexual leanings by having a black man stretch out her horizons by fucking her hard to turn her into a wild wanton slut for BBC as she gets impregnated by potent Black sperm much to the embarrassment to Suzy and the pleasure of her Mistress who will work her doing unpaid overtime to sate her needs.

Love to read about blackmailing. How about the little slave getting shaved and pierced

not the best format, but I like the idea, my kind of story.

Dear readers, I am happy to tell you all that I will be uploading the second chapter to this series and will be continuing thereafter. Please show your love via your response... Also I have corrected the grammer in this part and is now more feasible to read, so before reading the next chapter you may want to give it another go...

Happy reading....