All Comments on 'Secrets'

by techsan

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TheKiiierTheKiiieralmost 19 years ago
Good sexy fun!

As the title says, it was a good sexy read that just on the basisalone told it was fun story, nothing heavy or serious. Keep up the good work.

Note though that there is a glitch that sliced the story around for me so I had to (for example)read a little bit and in the middle of a sentence skip around to find the rest of a sentence/paragraph then back track and do it a couple more times. I'm sure it wasn't the fualt of the author but a glitch in the site server since every now and weird stuff like happens on the site. It's not a biggie for me but some poeple are gonna tank the story in terms of rating just to get back at what they think the author did even though it's not his/her fualt, that's just sad and being petty.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

SO VERY SILLEH!

I mean, Jesus Christ. This is not well-written, and can we move away from the magical land of twelve-inch cocks and super-sperm and all that bullshit. It's not cool

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It seems that whilst writing it you did a 'Cut & Paste' but put pieces together in the wrong places!

VERY disconcerting!

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