All Comments on 'Secrets'

by A_Night_in_Singapore

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very good...

...and I hope this story continues.

Would be great to see how Nick tells Gina of his fantasy concerning her, and how the story progresses. 5*

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

What will her husband's reaction be when Gina reve as ls to him that she is pregnant with her black lover's baby

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 4 years ago

Well, well, well... :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Short but hot

Well damn! Shit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazingly hot!

Seriously great storyline and pacing. I rarely rate stories a 5 on here but I really enjoyed this and look forward to enjoying more of your creative efforts. Might I suggest that you let a trusted source proofread your stories prior to submission. It would only enhance your efforts, Night.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Trash

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