All Comments on 'Secrets Among Friends'

It's a very subtle promise of something better.

Please, continue to write; don't be put off by the vocal minority who attack anyone who contributes to the "Loving Wives" genre.

Overall it's a good start, but please kep track of the voice in the story line. In this story I had trouble following along when the speaker appeared to change. An editor may be able to help with this 'problem'. I look forward to reading more of this story and of your future works.

Babs, I really want the rest of the story - is it somewhere here and I'm missing it? My imagination can take it in several directions but I'd like your version... (Tomstone from fetlife)

Cheating whore by a guy who calls himself SubBabs. Has to be a winner.