All Comments on 'Secrets and Solace Pt. 02'

You're doing very well. Characters are well drawn. Please continue!!

Thanks, Anonymous. That means a lot.

More please, loving this story a lot.

5/5, a high score for a great story.

Keep it up please., lots more chapters needed

Thanks, WG. I have one more right now and then something completely different. Still, I'm pretty sure I'll be revisiting these two.

Some of the sex narrative was just bazaar ...4*

I'm glad that you had her kick the sad sack of shit boyfriend to the curb. I'm still trying to figure out the Lindbergh Field reference. Later on you mentioned that he was at Lackland. My cousin worked at Lackland for many years before retirement. San Antonio and San Diego are over a thousand miles apart.

Thanks, Demosthenes. I appreciate it. I get you, Scottish. I didn't explain well enough that Bren moved Shannon from San Diego to Madison while on leave from Lackland.

Liked it but still no sex between brother and sister 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!