by Pecos_P3t3
I hope this story keeps the lovers together, they marry and have kids. Incest never shares, a truism, check it out.
Keep the chapters coming.
Scores 5/5
Generally a decent read BUT I got great tired of the constant calling each brother or sister. Who needs the reminding? You obviously. It really detracted from an otherwise decent story. 2 stars
Again - Some of the narrative during sex is just weird, plain and simple. Need to build more on the relationship - Are they going to be a couple or not? 4*
I just came across this it was a very interesting story I said before what was it about their mother needed more information?? You need to continue and see if she gets pregnant and if they live together as husband and wife!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good story. Needs another chapter or two. Would be hot if Keisha and Rachel joined them in a four way.