All Comments on 'Secrets at the School Gate'

Tastefully warming story. I look forward to reading about her further adventures at Carpenter’s

You probably don’t believe me,but this is Holly Willoughby,and I occasionally read lit erotica ,especially spanking stories!Some authors have written stories on this site about me,but I would love to read one about 3 dirty old men giving me a good thrashing,and then obviously having sex with me,using my body for their own pleasure.They would humiliate me and abuse me and force me to enjoy it.Would you be kind enough to write a story about me using these ideas?If not,then no worries,I will still read your next spanking story.Love,Holly Willoughby x

You're right, I don't believe you.

You've sent me a private message insisting you are who you say you are. You don't live far from me. You can prove it by hoisting a balloon up your flagpole at home. If I drive past and see it I will know it really is you.

Hope you got my message re giving me a personal spanking,love,Holly W x

My bum and tits are waiting for your hands to punish them.My shaved cunt is wet as I imagine being thrashed by you,love Holly W x

I put in place measures which would have allowed you to contact me directly if you were the real Holly. As you haven't, I have to conclude what I suspected all along which is that you are a fantasist.

Part 2 could have the husband catching-on and really keeping her bottom warmed for a week !!

Nicely crafted spanking story which I enjoyed very much.

Wonderful story, sexy and exciting, I love it...

What a lovely, sexy, realistic story. I loved it. Anonymous school mum! Me next please. x

Anonymous - glad you enjoyed it. Send me a PM and you can be next!

Anonymous - glad you enjoyed it. Hope you have found the next two stories in the Carpenters' Upholstery trilogy. Send me a PM and you can be next!

This story is so great, so realistic, and it’s just one step on from going to a personal trainer or for a massage, right? The intimate bits might be a teensy bit unfaithful, but surely a spanking is only an extra firm massage? Do you think a busy husband would accept that? I get massages from a Thai masseuse which really hurt (although in my shoulders rather than my butt!) and I am wondering how many girls go to men like Peter in the story to get spanked in real life?!

If you are a mum (especially a London mum) and do this sort of thing please write in and tell us! I know lots of us read literotica!

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Great story, very erotic and well written. Perhaps some of the longer paragraphs could have been broken up a bit but it didn't retract from the overall content. I look forward to the next two chapters.