All Comments on 'Secrets I Have to Keep'

Bravo Bravo Bravo

You're first story was excellent it wasn't over the top or too long the build up the tension the sex it all flowed so well. I look forward to what you post next. Keep up the great work

That was excellent. Would like more description of his ejaculating in her young pussy and of is big daddy cock and sack. Hope there is another installment of his cock visiting her tight pussy and it getting filled with his cum. Then if she were to conceive a little one, that would be great as well.

Loved the hair on Derek's chest, and his big cock. Please write another chapter, about their next get-together! They worked out great together!

Congratulations on your first story!

This tale certainly deserves at least a second chapter. I really enjoyed your style and look forward to much more of this quality of work!

Fun, quick read. Your style is very smooth and your descriptions are the best! I really enjoyed how little hesitancy she had, nor did she spend too much time berating her actions or feeling guilty. Refreshing for a change. Great job!

Great story, nicely told. I love the age difference involved.

Jaz,

Exquisitely done! Just the right touch. Enchanting erotica.

I look forward to all your stories, and maybe poems?

Great work on your first story. It’s hot, wild and a fun, naughty excursion. She better not let a secret like that slip out during sex! Looking forward to reading more of your imagination…

Excellent first story, very well done. I'm very glad your wrote believable characters, no DD tits, and no 12 inch cock. I do wonder if she called him 'Daddy' at any time that weekend. Five stars from this old reader. I'll be looking for more stories from you.

Absolutely riveting!

Great story. Well written. I was wondering why you chose to stop writing after this beautiful story?