by erossmantic
You have to keep going with this story. It's captivating and completely erotic
Great continuation, hot sexy, the first chapter was better, but you have left yourself open for lots more possibilities. I look forward to ... the possibilities
... was slightly better. but i'm curious about the next! go on like this! great story!
Awesome stories. Hot, sexy and well thought out. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Carrie should have taken advantage to kiss Krasa before leaving, but love the story. anxious for what happens between Carrie and Steve and what things Carl has in mind for the future.
It's great and satisfactory enough. However, I hope you will continue this series.
I enjoy both parts, especially the gradual intensive increase of the first chapter.
I have been reading all your stories in alphabetical order and the hav all received 5's.
This story however needs to continue to a wild conclusion. Your writing suggests that you are a male, but in some of your stories your gender seem female. This is the mark of a good imagation or have a wonderful sex life. I love reading Sci-Fi and mind control stories, but you are easily one of the top 5 writers. I am putting you as one of my favorites. flyinggolfing @ hotmail. Hoping your continued stories.
Some of the best writing that I've had the pleasure of reading on this site.