All Comments on 'Seducing our Son'

Please ask someone to read your stories before posting. You have way to many errors in punctuation and your sentences are going to throw people out of the story.

Also, to go along with the above the "i-we" We - us etc was VERY redundant.

Fantastic story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It isn't all good news though. You need to pay more attention to editing etc. The first third or so of the story was repeated before moving on to the actual account of Tony fucking Sue. I particularly enjoyed the fact that the narrator (husband) was both happy and excited by Sue's flagrant seduction and fucking of their son, a true cuckold is born! I still gave it 5 Stars, it's well worth it. Will there be a second chapter I wonder? Hope so!

Thank you all for your very constructive and helpful comments, rest assured I will endeavour to do better next time.