All Comments on 'Seducing Zoe Pt. 03'

by Shaima32

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

More! :D

I truly enjoy all your stories, read some multiple times! It's crazy you're straight considering how all ten typing fingers are spot-on the lesbian pulse; then again, are we really that different-- same of you just x2. Looking forward to more stories and continued ones!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Feeling attacked.

It's kind of dissapointing as a male reader of your stories who actually appreciates the sensual and emotionally rich aspects of the love scenes you write that you keep putting my entire gender into a box of confirmation bias. Men don't enjoy the act of kissing? Men who just go to bed leaving you unsatisfied? This is the kind of idiotic nuclear-family, gender-role based thinking that damages most of the lesbain stories on this site, because its exactly the same thing that straight men do when they think all lesbians are masculine and into scissoring. I understand women have the same anatomy, that doesnt mean there arent straight men who dont want to pleasure their partner and learn how she responds best. You need to stop saying this bs

unscriptedwriterunscriptedwriterabout 4 years ago
Great writing, despite men being simplified

Hi there! Love your writing; however, I'd have to agree with Anonymous that the writing tends to attack, stereotype and oversimplify men and their interactions with women. I'm a married lesbian who adores men and their complexities, contrary to the common stereotype that lesbians bash men or don't see them as whole.

Just my 2 cents, but overall love the story and can't wait to keep reading!

MaonaighMaonaighabout 4 years ago
Tangled web

This certainly is a tangled web, not necessarily of deceit but of uncertain relationships. But at least Zoe is free of Grant (exorcist manque) and without any effort on her part. The usual great chapter, Shaima, and a good illustration of the dangers of addiction, especially for recovering alcoholics not to get involved with other stimulants.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

This was an amazing chapter. It's insanely hot, in fact. But I have to admit, I really want a version of the story where Charlie doesn't screw with the phone.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Did i smoked that too

My heart is beating wild ..... Very emotional intense packed up story .... Absolut great writing

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94about 3 years ago

I hate manipulative humans they disgust me I honestly don't care if someone has sex with 50 people in one night, they will need an IV, but people can so as they wish when others aren't harmed. So when Charlie was caught I Breakfast Club fisted the air with joy. Also side note yes we Americans are weird though there are those of us that don't fit the classic mold thank you. Great writing as always.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Y, the counter version where Charlie doesn’t screw with the phone would be interesting. Notable that Zoe is angry about that, whereas Lisa is angry about the dope (which she doesn’t know Zoe said she’d always wanted to try as soon as she saw it, not tricked into). Illustrates rush-to-judgment/cultish side of AA.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Fucking drugs and BDSM.AGAIN!.When will you writers EVER learn?.Not everyone is into this stuff.A big turn off.

Thanks.

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