All Comments on 'Seduction at 37000 Feet Ch. 01'

What a tantalizing tale. I am looking forward to reading more of Mike and Melinda's amorous adventures.

One minute it's he/him and she/her, suddenly it's I/me and her. Get your act together!

Anonymous needs to remember the adage about "he who is without sin, let him cast the first stone". This is an AMATEUR site, after all! It looks like this is only the author's second story here on Lit, and maybe anywhere for that matter, so my advice to him (her?) is to simply find an editor. All that is needed is someone who will read the story with a critical eye before it is submitted. By the way, the story is a VERY good fantasy!