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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The Funeral Crashers???

Well not every principal characher has to be a prince. This guy was either a prince or a sleazebag. That depends on what he did the next morning. Did he run away never to grace her doorstep? If so, sleazebag. His words certainly got her hopes up and her legs apart.

R.

PolyLvrPolyLvrover 4 years ago
A for effort

I feel English isn’t your first language so I applaud your effort.

Unfortunately your dialogue seems overly flowery. Too sickeningly sweet to deserve full marks.

Read more, here, and keep trying

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago

Picking up widows at a funeral. Now that's an LW story to care about.

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A mature man, I live in Nairobi, Kenya, have been divorced once and love everything to do with writing and reading. I have loved the English language since I was a small boy in primary school, around age 10. I have been told that my spoken English is excellent. I also love se...