All Comments on 'Seductive'

by Julirose

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Delicous..

Julirose, your story was delicious to say the least, I loved it. It was raw, powerful, seductive, dark yet poignant too. Great work, lass.

From a fellow writer in Lit.

_Lady1SensuaL1Fire_

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Dark and Fiercely Erotic

A very lusty tale. Well written. A bloody good beast on the prowl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I'm a little confused

I give the story a 5. However there is a passage where the vampire drank milk from her breast. Was that her breast milk or her blood? Was she lactating? Did she recently have a baby? Does this vampire derive sustenance from human breast mlk? Please clarify. Thanks

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