by runningonblade
Could have been good, but WAY too short and no need for the harsh side. It could have been very erotic.
Boring, ignorant, and completely lacking the slightest tinge of eroticism.
This story is too short and lacks enough detail or development to make it interesting. Also, BDSM is consensual. This story might be a better fit in the nonconsensual category.
Certainly was disappointing . If there is a part 2 I hope it includes major revenge.
Purile illiterate rubbish, and that was the good part!