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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My 2 cents

I like the start. Good characters and story line. I will be looking forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

If Chapter One is any indication of what is to come, Seed of the Void is going to be an outstanding series. Excellent characters, great writing, a compelling plot, and a marvelous love scene all add up to Five Stars. Hopefully, there will be more chapters before too long.

Diestro_AmanteDiestro_Amante4 months ago

Good character work which engages in the interesting story and nice world building. Great start to a series

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