All Comments on 'Seedy Liaisons'

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Very hot

Yes seedy, but so worth it. These two are very hot together. Please write more

rombo034rombo034over 9 years ago

Fast and high-paced, with a vivd and effective description of the female character.

It deserves to be developed ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Familiar

This is good but also very similar to a description of how an encounter would have played out with a guy I was speaking to who was also called Jay, had we met. Too much craziness and drama made sure we didn't.

Also met on a dating website

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