by NancyAllbright
This is good but also very similar to a description of how an encounter would have played out with a guy I was speaking to who was also called Jay, had we met. Too much craziness and drama made sure we didn't.
Also met on a dating website
Fast and high-paced, with a vivd and effective description of the female character.
It deserves to be developed ;-)
Yes seedy, but so worth it. These two are very hot together. Please write more