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The current story is light on description of sex for a reason. It was more about the characters dealing with their emotions and fixing their relationship. Honestly, if I had put in a lot of graphic detail into the sex it almost feels like it would have been filler getting in the way of what the characters actually needed to do.
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RodimusMike12 months agoThis should have had a continuation,I mean for Cindy to declare to the whole bar that that was her Brother or Half Brother and proceeded to suck his face to everyone and claimed to be in love with him and to take him home and fuck him constantly.
And also have Cindy be off the pill and for her Half Brother to fuck a baby into her,and it be a girl and they name her Madeliene after there dead sister as a tribute.Finally if Cindy and Half Brother have different last names have them go to Las Vegas and get married to eachother and raise Little Madeliene as there half sibling/half daughter. That would have been so beautiful.
linnearabout 3 years agoThis very interesting and it left me wanting more answers. There was an accident and family members died, I'm guessing that the step mother sent him into foster care and Jill was just to rough? Not sure but still pretty damn good.
MaximusTheMadabout 3 years agoIt was pretty good. The best story you've written in a while. Good Character development. There were a lot of plot holes. I didn't understand the whole breakup with his girlfriend and why. I'm guessing she was too much but it wasn't clear. The story felt incomplete.
