All Comments on 'Senior Lovers'

by The_old_man

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i_m_justplainbilli_m_justplainbillover 16 years ago
Finally, a real live cast of characters

I read a lot of porn and write some myself but have not had as much pleasure from most of them as this one. The male is not superhuman, he is a man of taste, wit, good judgment and good humor. Some of the details seemingly just thrown in come in to play later in the story making the reader comfortable that he/she is not being fooled. The ladies are a true slice of life measuring up to the two such mother/daughter experiences I had growing up. I had hoped for some girl-girl play as it has always been my fantasy, but it would not have fit the fabric of this story. Do keep on writing and I will keep reading your work with pleasure. At 72 I still need to off the pressure every day and this tale helped a great deal.

rightbankrightbankabout 11 years ago
distracting

there are so many spelling errors it is difficult to follow the story. Ellen, Elene, lose, loose, waist, waste, etc. etc. etc.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Pathetic

crap

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