All Comments on 'Separately Equal'

Wtf 😂 I can’t with this crazy girl

I'm really interested in finding out what happens next. Thank you!

Oh , yeah... She fool.

More please!

I don’t care what anyone says, this story is incredible lmao. Please, write more of these two holy shit. It’s a hot dynamic.

Who the hell censors a word on a lower literature site?

You surprised me with the ending. I thought for sure she was going to scoop his semen into her vagina.

Then I thought, they‘d meet up in therapy and make a go of it. There needs to be a part 3! They are so crazy and it‘s soo wrong, that it‘s actually good. Go figure!

aw man not the ending i had hoped for

Wow. This story is so ... so umm, I'm having trouble finding the words so let me just copy and paste from one of the other anonymous comments: 'There needs to be a part 3! They are so crazy and it‘s soo wrong, that it‘s actually good. Go figure!' ... Yeah, like they said.

Other than the racism parts I've seen this story play out in my old neighborhood. Woman took advantage of a guy when he was drunk at a party, plays him for a bit with hot and cold texts and voice mails. He gets mad and takes her hard after getting her high, she likes it, but want him even madder, does the police and fake pregnancy thing too. She gets to live in a woman's shelter (which was across the street from where I grew up), while sneaking him in at night. Ends up with 3 of his bastards before they decided to stop playing games and get married. Fucking shit man.

This writer got their heart broken by a black woman ... I swear😅 the amount of Krazy in their stories. YO it's pathetically sad but hey whatever whatever helps them mentally get thru life