All Comments on 'Serendipity 05: Happy Birthday, Dads!'

I think the best way to answer your question is: I sure hope you have another one in you and it won’t take too long to publish! Of the 5 chapters the only frown was the “slimy” ass to mouth calk scene in chapter 4. I didn’t care for that one but the rest was so good I still gave it 5 stars. You are that good and it’s your fantasy. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Keep writing you are on my follow list so as soon as you publish I will see it.

Another 5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

P.S: A “spit roast” is one calk in the pussy or ass and one calk in the mouth. A couple of times you referred to a DP as a spit roast. No worries I still enjoyed your story.

Loved this tale. I hope we hear more about them.

Between this and the last chapter, this has gone from a fun and sexy tale to a bunch of weird kink. I'm sure you're eventually going to get the dads together, as you've already foreshadowed. It's your story so you can take it wherever you want. But sorry, no longer my cup of tea.