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All Comments on 'Serenity Pt. 02'

by bthomas40

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TootsallTootsallabout 9 years ago
So Far the chapters are a bit short

But the story has potential. I'd really like to see them (the chapters) either longer or much more frequent. As is I am afraid you will lose your readers' interest before the plot develops any further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

So far I'm quite interested in seeing how this story develops but I would also like some more character development. For instance why is Brian a Dom and how did he get to this point?

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