All Comments on 'Sergeant Britton Ch. 01'

18 orgasms? 20 minutes regular then 10 anal, all without coming? At least make it believable.

So full of carp, from the gitgo

It needed a good editor for the grammer and spelling. I think what probably happened is that you got excited as you typed it and didn't notice the errors. Either get an editor or wait a couple of days and re=read it to make it more pleasurable to read. And don't over-do the cock size.

While the number of orgasms was *cough* slightly unrealistic (it's forgivable - this was fiction after all, right?), the element of non-consensual/force was a high point. LOVED it! Being dominated by a man in uniform has been a favorite fantasy of mine for a long time. Very erotic. I might suggest the use of an editor to help fine-tune certain points. Would love to see more ;-)