by Storm62
No need to apologise for the length of this little gem. Hit all the right spots for a bit of light lunch entrainment.
I must say, you have written the perfect story about a complete idiot. What Carla ever see's in him I just don't know.
I like this story... a lot. Would be nice to have a little more to it, but it does stand nicely on it’s own. Thanks, Storm62.
Better late then never! Somewhat sad that 20 of the best years of their lives passed them by before they finally got together.Who knows,maybe fate determined that this was just their time. In any case,the story does a wonderful job of setting the stage and then bringing them together with an economy of words. Whenever I finish a story and wished it went longer I know I read something good. A 5 rating for this little gem of a story!
20 years is too long a time for the story, they never moved on? IN 20 YEARS?
Otherwise, I really liked it.