All Comments on 'Serial Bad Decisions'

by Storm62

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Seven years would have been more believable. 20? Nah, too many.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

20 years is too long a time for the story, they never moved on? IN 20 YEARS?

Otherwise, I really liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bittersweet Excellence

Better late then never! Somewhat sad that 20 of the best years of their lives passed them by before they finally got together.Who knows,maybe fate determined that this was just their time. In any case,the story does a wonderful job of setting the stage and then bringing them together with an economy of words. Whenever I finish a story and wished it went longer I know I read something good. A 5 rating for this little gem of a story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I like this story... a lot. Would be nice to have a little more to it, but it does stand nicely on it’s own. Thanks, Storm62.

Dubby49Dubby49over 11 years ago
20 years

what a waste.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY

and tempting fate...Works for me. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

I must say, you have written the perfect story about a complete idiot. What Carla ever see's in him I just don't know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More Please

more please

anon UK

Big BuddyBig Buddyover 11 years ago
Delightful!

Wonderfully constructed and told. Please give us more

GentleVikingGentleVikingover 11 years ago
Short and sweet

No need to apologise for the length of this little gem. Hit all the right spots for a bit of light lunch entrainment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wonderful

sad but lovely. will there be more of them?

HonourHonourover 11 years ago
Loved it

I needed this today gentle and hopeful

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It might look like I came late to writing, but in fact I have been scribbling (and typing!) for a long time now. I've just been reluctant to post any. I began posting my non-sexual stories on my blog site,and this led to me taking the plunge and revealing the darker side of my...