All Comments on 'Serpent's Salvation Ch. 07'

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jes1701jes1701about 19 years ago
I love it love it love it

I love it and want more please your killing me more more more of this great story please

~Jessica

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Write Faster!!!!

I love this... you just need to finish chapters faster... no pressure though.... Thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
to short

I love the humor,but it is fast pace reading so we need longer chapters. but I am looking forward to their next altercation,please dont keep us waiting too long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Don't stop!

Just found your story and went back to read the whole thing. Great dialog. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice, funny

Seb so needs to calm down, though I can understand his being pissed, and poor Aurel, trying to bulldoze a southern boy? That just doesn't happen. Something tells me he's about to get a rude shock in lessons of give and take. And Mych, he so needs a happy ending...

LavonyaLavonyaabout 11 years ago
OH MY EFFING GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohhhhhhehehehehheheheheheheheheehehhehehe...............kgxeheheheheehkgxgheheheheheh......I....think.....I'm....gonna need ice.... I might of cracked a rib from laughing so....hard......OH MAN.....you ARE a great author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poseidon7Poseidon7over 10 years ago
Loved it

Haha the story is really good and the humour included is priceless

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story

loved the humor, the charkters, the plot....the sexual tension

please continue

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