All Comments on 'Serum 42 XXL Pt. 01'

The wedding ring thing was a real turn-off. Hate that you chose to have her still married.

Interesting... I look forward to its continuation :D

Chapters 1 - 11 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

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Thanks for reading!

Hope you plan on continuing this story.

Boring, unimaginative, no background, he spills the serum, and suddenly he has a schlong the size of two coke cams?

An oldie....but still a goodie

Really bad. At least make an effort to understand the subject you are writing about first

Are you the author of this story? I found this as an illustrated story online a while back. I could give the web address but I think that's against Literotica rules.

@Robinius1

He is.

Needs more chapters

I am the author. This was a commissioned story from a while back that included illustrations by JDseal.

🔜 WICKed Hormones…©RTR9209 📖

Great start, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this tale. Keep writing, it's much appreciated 😊👍

What a shame the illustrations are not included

4/5

"Don't worry. I'll help you with anything you need."

"I really need to fap."

A little more creativity from the author side could have been used here.

Actually WICKed is a basic rip off, The Dark Stone. They virtually start off very similar.

Rawly would like to see you write a Daddy story, instead of always the son. Also occasionally leave the dad completely out of the story with mom and son.

TRITE !