All Comments on 'Serum 42 XXL Pt. 03'

Good story, but the chapters are too short. With most of your stories we get nearly two pages per installment, but with this story it's only one. Would appreciate it if you could lengthen future chapters.

Would be so cool to read a story that didn't rely on ridiculous sizes to make the plot exist. Not sure I'll live long enough to find one, though.

Chapters 1 - 11 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://rawlyrawls.com

Thanks for reading!

Two pop cans??? Get real!