All Comments on 'Setting Wife Up With Our Lawn Boy Pt. 02'

FANTASTIC story!!! Very HOT!!!

Great finish. Like the fact you also offered two different endings. Glad you added the risk of pregnancy into the second chapter and probably let the young guy knock her up. Good work.

Epilogue: Tanner, of course was the father. No way sissy wimp Brian could get Amanda pregnant. The cheating skank slut dumped Brian and headed off to college town. When she arrived she found Tanner in his dorm room not fucking Mackenzie but another girl altogether, some slut named Ellie. He didn't even try to hide his disdain for the old hag. "Really Amanda? You believed all that bullshit I fed you to get you to spread your whore legs? Just how stupid can you bimbo sluts be? Beat it bitch, I don't need some pregnant fat lady hanging around messing with my fun." Amanda cried and cried for being such s stupid whore. Brian cried and cried for being such a pathetic loser. Tanner laughed and laughed at these two complete idiots.

FAFO

I wasted my time

I didn't read the story. The title and intro were enough to turn my stomach. I'm quite old and can say with honesty I have never known a real man who would want to see his wife being screwed by another male. Young or old. If this scenario is your thinking pattern, I pity your wife. What would she think if she knew you were portraying her as a slut? I didn't read it so I won't score it, but you sir, need help.

I think it was great and well written. I just wish Brian had got to watch them in person. I'd have maybe liked to to see Tanner and Amanda have a go with Mackenzie together.

Outstanding! Passion and love intertwined with sex.

For me this was written without any vivid descriptions, story reads like individual sentences cobbled together (no continuous flow) but if all the readers want is a stroke story then you succeeded. Three stars. Good luck.

Well done. Superbly crafted and handled tastefully. There is a third scenario. The one where Amanda recommits with Brian, the baby's lineage becomes irrelevant, and Brian learns to use his knowledge and experience to have renewed passion as they start their family. After all, once a child comes it becomes a Mother's primary focus. All in all a thoroughly excellent read.

All the best,

Dave

Cuck wants to share cheating whore with a kid.

Both scenarios are stupid and impossible to achieve! This was a waste of time!

Great story! I'd prefer to see the first possibility for the continuation of the story. One possibility is that Tanner remains a part of Amanda's life. One can imagine some kinky possibilities if they keep meeting clandestinely.

Part 3 Brian tells Amanda. She kills Brian in his sleep and has a prison baby

great story, you are a great writer. keep up the work.

Hmmmm. The second ending is the least realistic imho. I was Tanner and am now married with a kid to a woman 12 years my senior. She had broken up before hand (I didn't separate them) and she had no kids. In fact she just had an abortion. She was very clear that if she was pregnant or with a kid, we would've never gone past the fling stage.

And there were grudges and resentment on both parts as our lives were very different and it broke us a couple of times. If there was a third party involved, we would not have lasted for sure. And I was doing my MSc I was not just getting ingo college. I dob't think there is a chance for Tanner and Amanda to be happy were they to try it. Another experience from my past, I made an ex gf cuckold me. We broke up because of it. She got together with the guy briefly. Then they broke up. The fact that he caused (from her perspective) our relationship to end was not something she could overcome. I am merely leaving these botes as I found your story well written and the characters usually believable.

I’m hoping Tanner is the real father of her child. It’s so hot thinking you have knocked a married woman up. Why Brian wanted to stop banging her till she got so horny she couldn’t help but look for other cock is beyond me. He kinda got what he deserved. Gave you a 5 star cause I just love slutty cheating wives.

I thought it was a really good story. Most of these stories are hard to read, but yours kept my interest. To the anonymous who left are bad comments: The topic is called loving wife’s. What did you expect ? I usually do not read stories this long and I was not disappointed. Five stars

In the intro to your first story you said you wouldn't consider this a true cuckold story but this is the quintessential cuckold story. The first part was ok as a hotwife story but his is 100% cuckold territory.

Wow....I sure enjoyed this...good story...any chance of you continuing this....would really love to read more of them....

Great story!

Thank you!

Divorce

She should stay with both of them.

You may get some praises but I'd think the score would confirm that people are tired of these types of stories.

Fantastic story well told. It really did get me hit and botheredI know you’ve written that this has come to its conclusion but please consider some way of continuing this story. And ignore the naysayers who comment here. Who reads these stories, knowing precisely what type of story it is, and then proceeds to trash it because of the type of story it is?

Needs closure. Needs to continue. Does the wife find the cameras on her own? What is her perspective after that. Good story

Now I need closure!!! Lol......I understand what you wrote in epilogue, but I guess I cannot help but be curious if Tanner really did knock her up......that would be really hot if he did.....I like the second scenario.....she divorces hubby and starts a new life with Tanner, filled with the passion they BOTH deserve. Great story overall, though.....gave this one 5 stars too

Loved it

Well done

I am not a BTB enthusiast. I enjoy wife watching erotica. But, I hated this. I don't want to spend too much time thinking about it. I feel like I've wasted enough of my time reading it. But, I think it was just that all the characters were just hateful. Many husbands in this genre feel like they aren't sexually enough for there wife, and want to see her pleasured. This husband has no interest in his wife's pleasure, he just wants to manipulate her and collect some wife porn. And the wife clearly doesn't love her husband. This is clear from her attitude from the very beginning. Finally, lawnboy is just a lunkhead teen. All of them simply hateful. The topping on this shit pie being that the sexual descriptions are not in the least hot. Simply awful.

I thought it sucked, the husband was an absolute moron and hit what he deserved, and the sex was nit hit to me nit a single blowjob, I won’t read any more from Scott green

Absolutely unbelievable and ridiculous character of ghd husband, really weird frankly and not at all a turn on once the initial sex was had, Poor job of articulating the sex scenes and the lack of blow jobs was as well weird, no more stories from this lamé author

Chapter one had my interest but the second part was trash, it wasn’t hot enough for one and just wasn’t believable nor respectful to husband. Even a guy who wants to see his wife with a young dude wouldn’t deny her(and himself) sex do get her weaker. Really lame the way he took off broke their date so she could fuck the kid again. Lost all respect for the author, I read the first two chapters of the latest fiancé gets seduced by this author but will not continue, this is Literitica your story is too wordy without enough hot, Zero stars

Hot Hot Hot! Poor Hubby set the lawn boy with his wife and she "Falls in love" with the 18 yr old when she is 30! I can see that happening! Poor Hubby lost the love of his wife. If it was a Lawn girl of 18 fooling around with hubby, that age difference would be understandable. But in this case Not so much! Either way, the poor hubby has punished himself, with a kid that isn't his! He accidentally turned his loyal wife into a cheating whore slut! Well, divorce and onto round two with another wife. Don't be so quick to set her up with another man next time or at least get better cameras! Great Effort, Great Story.

10 stars for great writing. Thanks, Buster2U

the first was a 8/10 this one is like a 3/10

Very well written, good development, nice flow and good sex.

There needs to be a third chapter where Tanner takes Amanda while Brian watches, and it works out so well that this becomes a regular thing.

I would have been happy without your epilogue telling me what the two endings should be. Forget the unimaginative critics always crying for another chapter because their minds don't like uncertainty. Let the reader have the uncertainty without your guidance. You should pour the foundation; your readers can build their own roofs.

Ed

I can't believe Brian kept the cameras running lol. I hope for the second path to be honest.

Yea because in real life hot sex is the basis for.love and marriage. Way to go Amanda. And Brian, well he is a total dipshit. All of the characters were execrable for one reasons or another.

Love these themes of cuckolding the cheating one. Here wife has her fun husband has his fun and still can save a face and also continue life as if it never happened

Great story!

The range of comments to your story only confirms the idea that you cannot please all the people all the time. I personally think your story was well written and with a totally believable story line. How many married couples out there are just one push away from infidelity? I think the number of divorces reinforces this. If the story has too much life and not enough raw sex, tuff! Ignore the buffoons and write your own story. Good job.

MarineBob48

What MarineBob48 said with knobs on. Five stars

I hope the part 3 with tanner and amanda together xd

Awesome story....I hope you continue this

I loved it and worse yet lived it We were hapy and forfilled for over 3 years life was incredible. The part of the story of being setup by the husband wasn't how we got together the result was the same. Through a family dynamic we left each other and never spoke again. I believe at least for myself the love and caring never stoped.

Written well even though the type of man like your MC makes me want to throw up. An idiot like him does not deserve a good looking wife as you presented and she sure deserves the reward of being free of him..4 stars..JZK

I'd have kept schtum about setting the two of them up as lovers, got some dna from her and had us tested us as parents. If I wasn't the father, I'd have divorced her, made sure I didn't pay for the child and kicked her out on her ass as she clearly loved Tanner and not me.

@Bowmar01 so you be ok with everything except her getting pregnant from him? 😂

Excellent story. Just the right speed, with great detail. Part two is a bit sad though at the end. I'd rather they keep an elicit affair going than a divorce.

A very good and emotionally laden story. Of course Brian is an idiot, and that idiocy is driven by the fact that despite your initial characterization, he is a classic cuckold. He seems to get off much more on the affair than from his beautiful wife. His masturbation seems much more enthralling than his sex with Amanda. Very sad and probably very common.

One word……menopause. Tanner won’t hang around for that.

Beautiful story. Well written. Your writing style is very captivating. Story seems like it could be so realistic with the way you set it up. Thanks for putting it out there. Love the way you framed the options at the end. Thanks.