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Click here"Bedroom is this way," she heard him call out.
"Fuck you," she muttered under her breath. God forbid he hear her and add more time. She just wanted to get the hell out of there before forgetting who she is.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoI love my good sis Victoria, but when is she going to take a shower? 😭 I’m joking but girl, learn to keep that mouth shut and stay focused on the objective: to end this nonsense as soon as possible.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI am reading this story for the 3th time now and guess what? it is not getting boring. Girl you have such a skill with your pen. Thats simply amazing. I realy realy hope that you will give us more stories like this one or damnd dress. 5 stars!
Anonymousover 8 years agoNic says she fucks him for money, but she gave herself up for her parents lifes. Or what did it mean 'to make an example out of those who don't pay their debts'?
Anonymousover 9 years agoThe way I see it, it was Nic's bet, so he gets the benefit of the win. Not Victoria. But then I think more like Nic, and you apparently don't.
FemmeCyniqueover 9 years agoI keep coming back to your stories. So fucking hot. Something just caught my eye, though. If she lead to him getting a $500,000 car by walking into the room, doesn't that mean she's paid him in full? I mean, the only reason he's in possession of that car is because of her... rash behavior. Why didn't she jump at that? I know I would.
interweb88over 10 years agoI really like it can use suggest anything else that is like this I could read
Anonymousalmost 11 years ago....."unfortunately" that's what happens when you have a deep physical reaction to a guy you want to loathe, but yet your body "betrays" you. Been there, still NOT over him, physically. Ironically, he's part Italian, part Swiss and I'm Afro-Caribbean.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI can understand being near orgasm the first time with the work out he was giving her...but Victoria wrapping her legs around his waist in his office just because Nic had stepped in between her legs? Too soon, I think...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI love the way this story is going. We're not supposed to like Nic right now. You do a great job of showing us that he's a product of his environment but that there's something deeper inside of him that's caring. We're slowly watching both of them transform into new people. This is great!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoAnd I still don't like Nic. Story is great, but I'm still not converted. On to Chapter 3!!!
QUAMEY_Tover 13 years agoI really like this story....I really want Victoria to get a back bone....But whats the consequences to that....another week.
THELOVELY1GLOover 13 years agoA turn deserves another one. To barter/bet her against materialistic things is so low; then he does consider himself to be the Man?
Come on Victoria, man up baby girl...
Anonymousover 13 years agoHow dare Nic actually act like this whole situation is Victoria's fault. If it wasn't for him being such a man whore she wouldn't even be there. I hope she hands him his balls on a platter at the end of this.
Anonymousover 13 years ago*teardrop* nic is such a good guy. He tries so hard to be that stereotypical bad guy but its just not in him. Victoria should consider herself lucky lol
mariasmdabout 14 years agothis is great. its like my 3rd time reading this story and im still impressed and surprised at how well you write and how much i enjoy it.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoyep !! definately a story i am going to read and thoroughly enjoy! which i do right now!!
