All Comments on 'Seven Days Too Many Ch. 01'

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jazzharpjazzharpover 3 years ago
Finish it!

I haven't read the original story, so maybe my remark is off the mark. But it seems that Lacey is toast. Why not finish the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The original DamonX story is www.literotica.com/s/8-days - an unfinished work from 2010. It might've been a good story if it were continued to some sensible conclusion. Another user (FinishTheDamnStory, aka FTDS) decided to put their own ending to this as www.literotica.com/s/8-days-day-2-ftds - which doesn't fit exactly as FTDS tends to be more likely to BTB (burn the bitch/bastard) than the original authors in most stories. And now there's this www.literotica.com/s/seven-days-too-many-ch-01 which is no better as an attempt to add a third-party ending than any of what came before. Too bad. If the original author hadn't abandoned this story and a couple others (such as "Danielle's Revenge") in a position which looks to be incomplete, then maybe it would've been worthwhile.

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This is me, Sev. Aka SEVERUSMAX. I can't get back into my main account for some odd reason, though I can on the forum. I created this account so as to continue posting my stories on that side. Thanks for your continued reading of my smut. I don't mind constructive criticism, b...

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