by happenstance
Welcome back - it's been a while. This was a great comeback and worth the wait. (I've always wanted to know why 'Outsmarted' was taken down. It was one of the best short teases I have ever read.)
@anonymous - Yes, it's been a while. Thank you for your warm welcome! Actually, I had forgotten my password, so I couldn't log in to this account. I did post a few stories from other accounts:
https://www.literotica.com/s/those-were-the-days
https://www.literotica.com/s/openness-leads-to-more-openness
https://www.literotica.com/s/milk-brings-us-closer
Could you tell me more about the "Outsmarted" story? I might be able to find it.
Once again, thanks for the feedback.
I feel like you struggle to connect all of these stories with any sense of realism
@Anonymous Could you explain what you mean by:
"I feel like you struggle to connect all of these stories with any sense of realism"
Thank you.
@anonymous The title matches the story as it's seven days. Count the days again. Thanks for reading it.
Hey Happenstance - "Outsmarted" was written before the end of 2015, Protagonist peeps on his mother in the shower. Later, he feels that he's being watched - a role reversal. When he re-checks his vantage point he finds a note.
It was probably only a single Literotica 'page' - but the writing was tight and real - no details of what happened next - that was left to the reader's imagination - and I imagined a lot!
@anonymous - I have resubmitted the "Outsmarted" story. Will share the link when it's uploaded. Will take around 2 weeks. Thank you!
@anonymous - please see if this is the "Outsmarted" story you were looking for:
https://www.literotica.com/s/love-and-desperation-can-lead-to