All Comments on 'Seven Lessons Ch. 01'

If you use your imagination (and NOT in writing sexual scenes) you could ensure that he becomes totally humiliated and feminised without actually having sex.

Mind you, IF you decide you MUST write about him having sex (and let's face it you wrote his storyline making him out to be an arsehole), make sure it's a disgusting and as humiiating as possible, because I think the bitch deserves it.

The more painful and humiliating the better.

Chapter 1 is very original. I hope to follow along with the other 6 lessons. This can go so many way with just the lessons, let alone what will happen after the lessons are learned. And who is this invisible teacher?

and very unique story! I can't wait to see what other lessons await him.

VERY interesting, especially beings that it's only part one.

I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of them.

Thanks

look forward to your next chapter, very well written!

its cut off not cut up

i wish someone would do that to me as i am reading this wearing my swiming costume

Cute story,looking foreward to Part2