All Comments on 'Seven Minutes of Heaven?'

A lovely little story. Nice dialogue (always so important) and lots of cuteness.

My only question would be about the UK/US style: you mention A-levels, so sounds British, which is even more of a plus point on my book (although we don't "graduate" from A-levels); but on the other hand you mention "hickey" and "mom", as well as "mum". So I'm a bit confused where we are.

As a 'first time' story this is head and shoulders above any others I've read. Well done.

I thought it was a simple touching story of discovery, sensitively written. Much enjoyed.

Just wanted to thank you for the lovely comments I’ve received thus far!

In answer to Only_connect, I can confirm that this is UK-based. Although I am British myself, I have a hybrid UK-US writing style. This is largely for convenience, and largely to broaden my appeal, but also largely due to the influence that the predominantly American and Canadian writers on Literotica have had on my stories over the years.

Damn good story, and just the right ending.

As others I didn't appreciate the Americanisms. Keep it one side of the Atlantic or the other. But that's a minor quibble.

Loved this. Your writing is amazing. I like love stories so this was sweet. Hope you write more vanilla stuff. Its more my speed;)

As per usual GT a beautiful work of art. Hope your staying safe and holding up through this shitshow of a previous year.

Cheers

ItsYourBoi

Loved it, and them, and the dialogue...and ramped up quite quickly...buying a strapon the next day....kids these days....

Rather surprised about the comments about American-isms and insisting you stop-first time I've seen that.

As a Yank that lived in Bermuda 4 years and worked with a bunch of limeys/kiwis/aussies/yahpleas I grew quite used to their speech, and them mine-I was frequently the only Yank-I enjoyed your moving back and forth...not distracting at all.

5 and fave, and will also look for more of your vanilla...bloody pervy limeys....

Sorry for leaving this comment here about A Terror in the Night, buy there was no comment option there! I just found that story and loved it. I would really love to see a continuation too when Nadine arrives and discovers Nicole. Such an awesome bondage story. Thanks, GT!

R

Loved it.

I love the last line. “Seven years and counting.” Well written and definitely worth reading.

Great story, beautifully told.

Cute story. A great little read.

this was fun to read and imagine. good writing, solid 4 stars